All Comments on 'That Escalated Quickly'

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candacandaover 8 years ago
Great story!

Thanks for sharing that with all of us, loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great story but...

Great story and very personal - believable.

But please learn to proofread - spell check doesnt do it nor does it check grammar :)

It cost you a star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fun Story

Thanks for the good read, but your grammar/typo issues got in the way of the narrative sometimes :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

Please continue with a chapter two. Love hot tub and dare stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
very hot

Thanks for sharing this story... very enjoyable... can't wait to read about more of your experiences.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 8 years ago
great stuff but...

Great story. Really hope to see more from you guys. But please proofread, or use an editor. It's so easy to make mistakes when you're caught up in the story in your mind.

That said, more please? !

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