by sexualcouple22
Great story and very personal - believable.
But please learn to proofread - spell check doesnt do it nor does it check grammar :)
It cost you a star.
Thanks for the good read, but your grammar/typo issues got in the way of the narrative sometimes :(
Please continue with a chapter two. Love hot tub and dare stories.
Thanks for sharing this story... very enjoyable... can't wait to read about more of your experiences.
Great story. Really hope to see more from you guys. But please proofread, or use an editor. It's so easy to make mistakes when you're caught up in the story in your mind.
That said, more please? !