All Comments on 'That Girl'

But there has to be more to this story. I'm waiting!!!!

Actually I only made it half way through to paragraph 5 then fell asleep.

suggest you read some of the "How To" on the this board

perhaps starting with "Pick the Nits Before You Submit" by "WhiteWave48"

This one and others have helped me with my work , delaying them yes, still very helpful.

I will endeavor to read the rest your story at another time.