All Comments on 'That Odd Summer Fling'

by ElspethMoans

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sopharoonessopharoonesover 9 years ago
im right there with ya!

no seriously, this story has come across my screen at just that right time in my life! umph! im surprised no one else has commented though. it was very enjoyable, i love the whole barely-able-to-contain-ourselves sex. only 4 stars from me because there are two stories i read in this contest before i got to urs that had considerable build up and back story so unfortunately yours is too short for me! thats my only criticism . good luck! sopharoones :)

LoveMenLoveSexLoveMenLoveSexover 9 years ago
Great concept

I really liked the idea behind this story but so would like to see it serialised showing the meeting and each of the encounters, instead of being told at the end. The possibilities are legion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Seriously, write more. On this site it's hard to find things that are 1. From a woman's perspective, 2. Well written, 3. Cohesive stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

From a woman delighted to find these exciting, well-written stories with a woman's perspective AND written by a woman - five stars. From a woman with a hot fling with a musician that's been going on longer than a fling - five stars. Please return to write more.

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