All Comments on 'That Old House Ch. 03'

The excellence of the writing is obvious in this chapter, but that does not in any way alter the fact that this story is not a Romance. It belongs in the Erotic Couplings category. The author certainly has the talent to write a real and excellent romance story (including erotic elements), but it would have to exclude the elements found in this one: incest, urination, rough language, and casual relationships.

I like the story and the author's style of writing. My one wish is that the subplots could have been merged more seamlessly into the main plot. I realize this is fiction and it is suppose to reflect real life but never would one find so many people with such open, mature minds and egos.