All Comments on 'That Shirt'

Nice that you fleshed out the story (without making it 8 pages) instead of having them immediately hooking up at the party. I would have liked it a bit better if Jake returned the oral favor while recovering from her bj instead of just being good to go immediately after.

This story begs for more chapters! You've developed the story line & characters, now keep going!

After an eight year rest, I hope you're ready to write some more of this delightful stuff. Both of your characters were loveable and I hope to see lots more from you.

Your story was sweet and erotic and very nice!