by Cromagnonman
If you had put it in LW a lot more people would have read it. The moment I saw your name I knew that I would enjoy it.
Kate's love life is too much like musical chairs for me. First it is Adam, then it is Will, then Adam again (at least emotionally for her) and then finally Geoff. She is too flighty (one plane ride with Will and then she sleeps with him; and what about the other guys she allegedly "partied" with) for me to feel the sympathy that I think the author is seeking for her. I fear an unhappy ending for her and Geoff with her running away from him and her child.
and I'll enjoy reading it. You always deliver good reading!
Thanks!
Alan
I am a romantic(obvious) and gotta say I enjoyed this little gem. I am glad that everyone came out without bitter feelings, and I am happy Kate was able to find her happiness. Everyone makes mistakes, and I can't begin to hate someone for making one and then seeing that they did.
I do not believe in soul mates or any nonsense like that, romance is what you make it and how much work you give, so the ending was a realistic one to me.
Good job, and I will now be going through your other submissions.
Straightforwardly written, but with a good deal of realism. Very nice read.
but at the end of the day...Kate was just another fuck slut whore who nad to get every and any cock she could just why he let this skank back in his life is because he is a gutless wimp....should have booted her cheating ass in to the gutter where she belongs and go find a decent loving woman who sticks with one man and not spreads it about like the cheap whore Kate is.....once a cheat...always a cheat....prostitutes have better morals than this slut has...