All Comments on 'That Which Burns'

That was a great read, it reminds me of the writing of Sharon Green, at least in theme. The story could use some fleshing out; this kind of theme benefits greatly from character development and a background story, so we empathasize with the woman's ordeal. Looking forward to more additions!

I can't wait for the next part!

This was a very good read, I hope you continue it, would love to see more character development.

Thanks for sharing it !

Wonderful story. I hope you continue soon. What?s going to happen to the warrior queen?

I hope she kills the bastard!

... is NOT erotic.

Another please?!?!