All Comments on 'That'll Teach You!'

...he sure got her!Pisyolpackinpete

getting no pussy, you then blame her for a case of the crabs. Wonderful revenge, not. Why is she still in the home, why are you still married, why isnt she working to pay her share of the living expenses? Why is the main character of this a little boy with no brains? Silly and immature this!

don't see the humor

Pretty well written story from a technical perspective, but it missed its target. The story wasn't humorous nor was it erotic. Only minimal traces of satire, too.

Heh. Hahahahahahaha

A weird story but in a good way. It was more gross and icky then funny.

Plus, I could not actually follow his thinking (even if meant to be funny). At first he thinks: ok, let her have some strange if she needs the occasional extra (?). Then, feeling starved, he chooses to pay for what he's supposed to have at home 'on the house' (so to speak)... So when the inevitable self inflicted VD drives him nuts, he lets the VD do the talking for him, telling the little cheater what? that a little strange was fine but more than little was not? Oh well...

I can sort of see where the writer wanted to go but to me he didn't quite get there. But the wife will have to explain and that should be an interesting conversation if the writer continues this story. Overall not bad just not that great either. But don't give up writing.

Jack, I totally understood what you were trying to say here. People seem to forget the category name has two words to it: Humor/Satire. Nice job!

Haha! Classic. Well done.