All Comments on 'That's All She Said Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

my favourite story here keep on working please <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Story

Keep going, I love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Storyline ts very good but if you are still writing then for goodness sake get a decent Editor

several times you have typed the word QUITE it should be QUIET

It is Lay down not LIED and KNELT not KNEELED

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