All Comments on 'That's the One'

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calibeachgirlcalibeachgirlover 13 years ago
What's next?

Is he going to marry Eileen? That would be nice... and the other one, Jill, could live with them after dumping her stupid drunk of a husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Please continue. This is great

KentishKentishover 13 years ago
Great story

Nice theme, well written, hope there is more to cum :-)

leevineleevineover 13 years ago
This story is the one

Excellent story. A superior effort. One of eroslit's best stories to date. A sequel would be nice but isn't necessary. I'm sure I'll read this one again in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please continue

Loved the story sorry but I am in line to marry Eileen, I have her photos and phone number :).

Great story. I hope you continue this into a series with more adventures of Eileen, Jill, Brad &??. Hope Eileen & Brad stay together at the end of the cruise.

gara5289gara5289about 9 years ago

Love to see a sequel to this one.

David781David781about 8 years ago

Any plans to continue the story of their cruise?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

Would enjoy some more chapters of this great story

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