All Comments on 'That's What Neighbors Are For'

Don't believe the liberal media

That English isn't your first language, so I would say that you did reasonably well, from a grammar/spelling/punctuation point of view. If you were more familiar with the language, then I would say that your writing abilities aren't where they need to be.

On the story topic, the idea that two women would chose to be inseminated by men that they would not frequently see again seems just plain dumb, but since this is a place for fictional ramblings, go for whatever kinks ring your bell.

You didn't even need to say you like Fox News. It's quite plain to see.