All Comments on 'The 7-Day Challenge Pt. 01'

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EW2K2EW2K2almost 9 years ago
Good Lead-In

Great start. Let's keep this going, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excellent begin to the story

Can not wait for the next part...

funtungnfrogfuntungnfrogalmost 9 years ago
Looking forward to the next!

Super beginning and looking forward to the next submission!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Nice can't wait for more

wolf9696wolf9696almost 9 years ago
5/5

loving it , hope he ends up with both at the conclusion of this deliciously nasty tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great reading!

Well written, intriguing and flat out sexy. Bring on the next one!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I want to see the next chapter first one was excellent

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

love it so far cant wait for next chapter.

Incest with preg my fav

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
continue

this could and hopefully will be a continued story, and maybe 2 or 3 pages long instead of 1

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great story, and what a brilliant and original concept

My money's on mother Toni to win. Sure, Jimmy'll be screwing the little gold-digging tramp. As an 18 year old male, he'll take any halfway presentable twat on offer. But I bet that in his heart--and in his pants--Jimmy's a mommy-loving boy. For lots and lots of sons, the very idea of fucking a baby up where they were once a baby is like all of their birthdays and Christmases combined. Face it, nothing can ever feel as good--as warm and loving, as just so damn right--to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Brilliant so far

Absolutely great, loved the comments between the two women was in stitchs, now finish the story.....please!!!!

Ducky7Ducky7almost 9 years ago
This has got to be the greatest game thus far.

No sex in the first chapter but is was ozzzzzzing out onto the floor. James' dick must have been rock hard all night. I wonder if Momma cheated and caught him in the morning before work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
excellent!!

You rat bastard! You left me hanging. Can't believe you stopped at a huge climax like that. Give me more you son of a bitch!!!!

Hiding_in_PortlandHiding_in_Portlandalmost 9 years ago
Interesting.

Well it's an interesting start. Also in my mind all the characters talk with a southern draw.

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