All Comments on 'The Abandoned Son Ch. 03'

Please don't leave it to long before the next chapter.

Another great addition to the story. Hope to read more soon.

This is the third chapter of this story and you still won't use an editor. Your story could be one of the best, but it suffers from poor grammar, spelling and punctuation. Please use an editor. It's free and your stories could benefit greatly from someone else proof reading them.

Yes, this site is free. No, you don't get paid for your effort. Yes, it still matters.

Great story! Please do another chapter

We're still hoping for another chapter?

Working on it

I think that his mother and two sisters are trying to bring him back to land of the living so they can all heal in some way weather it's mind body and soul.

That is what I was going for.

Please find an editor! There are way too many grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes. Also, I can see Damien being with his sisters. However, I think he wouldn't want to be with his mother after what she did to him; in my opinion. It's your story though. Again, it is just my opinion.

The women arrived at his mansion, lived there for a while, and never asked how he earns his money? Then he flies them to Italy, picks them up in a rented Bentley, and takes them to a holiday palazzo, with private lagoon, and still none ask Damien about his money? These women are dumb. One wonders if they have to be told to breathe.

Now the three women need to get pregnant by him, and raise the babies together.

this one was a 2⭐️ story ,, you lost me for the female 3 way ,,, and WHY do they keep calling him Joshua knowing that pisses him off

He was left by his mother for 20 years and now falls into her as a lover 🤷🏼‍♂️🤷🏼‍♂️🤷🏼‍♂️🤷🏼‍♂️

Still a verygood story 5 stars !!!!!!!!!