All Comments on 'The Abbey'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent Start

Please continue - want to know why they were there and now that the Lady has discovered her 'urges' will she have more such adventures - and perhaps go even further down 'Debauchery Lane'....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Excellent, looking forward to the next experience/chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

It's quite nice, but it's not really Regency, is it? Mention of Talavera and Lady of Quality locates us, but you don't really use the mores of the times. Even the bold Oliver Carleton and Annis Wychwood wouldn't behave so blandly in this situation, as if it was merely slightly embarrassing. You need to give more of a feel of how much of a violation it is. But keep going: I enjoyed it greatly.

handhemphandhempover 10 years ago

Very enjoyable! I hope there is more of this soon

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