All Comments on 'The Abyss Ch. 01'

if for no one else please continue for this one reader, I am sure many more will make this same request, I read the prologue and thought it was going to be a bit deep and possibly not my sort of thing, oh how wrong I was, thinking how Justine will give up all to follow her heart and Mistress Laurin, please continue a really great effort

First time on this site and love it, this is one of my favourite chapters so far.

It's exciting and not too over the top.

Please continue writing, you are very good with words and description.

Please!

Please continue with further chapters. Your prose is exceptionally sweet.

Please, continue. You have a strong sense of verisimilitude going here.

Very good, please continue

I Hope you continue. I'd like to read more about Justine's relationship with her husband and her grown children. Does she still live at home. Is she a full time sub? What about her career? Did it continue? After her first experience with her domme how did her work life change? Did Sasha say anything after the Paris experience? Why did Justine have such sexy clothes on her trip when she admitted that she very rarely went out with co-workers?

This story was wonderful in all regards. It caught me by surprise, I have no read a story this good on Literotica in quite a while

I really loved this. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

It's always a pleasure to find a well-written D/s story, and an even greater pleasure to find one that foreshadows a strong current of romance, which is too often missing from D/s. Nice work.

One of the few stories that gives a real sense of the feelings involved, not just a description of a scene. I am looking forward to more about Justine's progress toward her new life. Also one of the few stories that feels like it was written by a woman and conveys her physical and emotional feelings without overdone standard cliche.

Excellent work and a pleasure to read!

Mistress Laurine;

please continue. the possibilities, here, are endless.

Great; maybe add a little more detail on the various clothes and foreplay to the BDSM sessions. This is not a criticism, just a possible suggestion.

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading Chapter One. It got me hot, wet and excited. I had me fantasize that I was going to a place similar to what you had written and allowed a Mistress to open my eyes to a whole new world of pleasure also. Looking forward to reading your newest chapters recently submitted.

One of the best stories I've read here in a while, well written and very erotic. I can't wait to read the other chapters.

I cannot stand reading your stories. They make me so hot and crazy. Please don't stop. I read one of your stories every night.

This story is beyond anything I've read to date about the surrender of a woman to her submissive desires! Beautiful imagery!

O-h-h, g-o-o-o-d-d-d!! REALLY good!!

Falling into the web or abyss of D/s will be a way of discovering your own fears until you could leave them behind ..... Its like a drug, starting with some mild stuff and moving on until uh hu

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