The Abyss Ch. 01

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"Please."

There was no response. I struggled to regain my footing on my heels. "Please make me cum."

"I think we've completed this session. Don't you?" She was teasing me. She knew we couldn't end yet. But she wanted to hear it.

"No. Please make me cum."

"Mistress Laurine," she corrected.

I wasn't going to argue. "Please make me cum Mistress Laurine."

"Did you want to feel one lash from my flogger before you cum?"

I was putty in her hands and she knew it. "Yes."

I could hear the whoosh of the flogger as she gently pulsed it back and forth next to my ear. Then without warning she unleashed a stroke on my unprotected breasts. It felt like firecrackers were set off next to my chest.

"Fffffffffffffffuck!!!" The crackling sensations on my breasts focused all of my attention there.

Laurine used one hand to pinch one of my nipples, accentuating the sensation of pain in my breasts, and then stroked the handle of the flogger hard against my clit. I ascended quickly to an orgasm and the waves of pleasure were magnified by the pain from my breasts that melted into puddles of ecstasy that merged with the warmth in my pussy.

"Cum slut," she commanded.

I did, over and over and over again, falling into a great black abyss.

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

Falling into the web or abyss of D/s will be a way of discovering your own fears until you could leave them behind ..... Its like a drug, starting with some mild stuff and moving on until uh hu

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

O-h-h, g-o-o-o-d-d-d!! REALLY good!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!

This story is beyond anything I've read to date about the surrender of a woman to her submissive desires! Beautiful imagery!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Teriffic

I cannot stand reading your stories. They make me so hot and crazy. Please don't stop. I read one of your stories every night.

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushabout 7 years ago
Very well done

One of the best stories I've read here in a while, well written and very erotic. I can't wait to read the other chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent story

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading Chapter One. It got me hot, wet and excited. I had me fantasize that I was going to a place similar to what you had written and allowed a Mistress to open my eyes to a whole new world of pleasure also. Looking forward to reading your newest chapters recently submitted.

SHAFERLINESHAFERLINEabout 7 years ago
Keep up the good work

Great; maybe add a little more detail on the various clothes and foreplay to the BDSM sessions. This is not a criticism, just a possible suggestion.

beretta84beretta84about 7 years ago
quite the tease...

Mistress Laurine;

please continue. the possibilities, here, are endless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Outstanding erotic writing!

One of the few stories that gives a real sense of the feelings involved, not just a description of a scene. I am looking forward to more about Justine's progress toward her new life. Also one of the few stories that feels like it was written by a woman and conveys her physical and emotional feelings without overdone standard cliche.

Excellent work and a pleasure to read!

visioneervisioneerabout 7 years ago

It's always a pleasure to find a well-written D/s story, and an even greater pleasure to find one that foreshadows a strong current of romance, which is too often missing from D/s. Nice work.

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