All Comments on 'The Accident'

for not signing donor cards.

Is it very bad I got about three times more queasy about the organ harvesting, as opposed to when that girl was made involuntarily airtight ? My only critique is that Mary Jo should have been Ben's spouse instead of girlfriend. Then this could have fit in Living err Loving Wives to garner the readership it deserves. *****

Not cool.

I’ve read your stuff for years now and I never saw this one. It’s such a different take for you. It’s like I went to see a baseball game and found I was watching football instead. It reminds me of a twilight zone script, but I can’t remember which one. Have you thought about writing more lik this one? This is obviously a very short one off, but if you could do it over again, what would you do with it?

Stay away from the light.