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Click hereI left a back door to turn it off IF I felt the need to end it early, or even if I wanted to extended it. I slightly felt bad for her. Ruth-Ann was going to experience what most 14-year-old boys go through!
That small feeling of compassion went right out of my head again after I got back to Jenny. If anything, I was feeling smug and self-assured and couldn't wait to see what happens with this.
People started to leave soon, it was a work day the next day for most people. Jon left in a cab, saying he would see me in the morning for the meeting with the lawyers and to be ready by 8 am for breakfast. Jenny and I wound up being the last ones from the party in the bar. I looked at her and asked her "Should I call you a cab, or would you prefer to come upstairs?"
She did not hesitate one bit when she said "Upstairs please!" And she grabbed my hand and started to pull me towards the elevator!
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The story got long before adding much physical contact between the characters. I was not sure if I should continue writing and have a long story ending with the two characters together, or if it should be in a chapter 4. Thoughts/comments?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoI agree with the consensus that longer stories are so much better. I know it has been many years since you posted this but on the off chance you do see this I wanted to say thanks for writing a fun and enjoyable story. I wish it would have been longer but the I generally feel that way about most of the stories I enjoy.
Lexx
ScottishTexanover 2 years agoI know that you wrote this many years ago, but I'm going to voice my opinion anyway. Longer is always better. I liked this chapter better than the first two because you DID actually work on the characters more. I did, however, have issues with the waitress taking time out for her tryst with Jenny. She wouldn't have been able to disappear for so long without being noticed. Jenny and the MC were not her only customers. But since this is fantasy, I let it go.
Giving Ruth Ann comeuppance was a nice touch. Making her sub for Jenny would be justice.
Timtom12over 6 years agoI will be expecting chapter 20, and all the other chapters in between.
Keep going!
Grindleover 6 years agoKeep up the good work. Very good characters. More of same please.
