All Comments on 'The Accidental Human Mate Pt. 01'

by Poisonkitten

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic start

I'm totally hooked. Eagerly awaiting more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please

don’t make us wait to long. Can’t wait for it to go on!!

PoisonkittenPoisonkittenover 6 years agoAuthor
Author's note

Hi dear readers and welcome to Kane and Isabella's story.

This is my first publication in literotica so forgive any grammatical and spelling errors. I didn't have this piece looked over by an editor prior to posting it.

I welcome critique and feedback and appreciate that you've taken the time to read my work.

Parts of it are very graphic and won't be to everyone's liking but it's a fantasy story so everything goes I suppose ;)

jaklanjaklanover 6 years ago
Disappointed

I was disappointed when it ended, and can't wait for more. Such a great start !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great!

Great start and i cant wait for more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
First post ....

Chapters needs to be a lot longer

FrannySmurfFrannySmurfover 3 years ago

I think this was a great start :) it hooked me in!

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