by CarolinaPeach
What an incredibly hot story. I wish you could have taken my virginity oh so many years ago.
This was pretty much what any reader could ask for. It was short but to the point, very detailed emotionally and very hot. It also had a very nice mini twist at the end that I should have seen coming. Nice job.
Nice; short, hot and great little details that really carry the action.
You know already I'm a fan of you and your writing. This was well told, and I hope true. It reminds me of my first time, decades ago.
http://www.literotica.com/s/nine-tmes