All Comments on 'The Accountant'

by silkcita

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Lonely_readerLonely_readerover 6 years ago
Fuck me that was good

If you have more of this story I can't wait to read it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Please more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hope you keep going with this one.

Thoroughly enjoyed it, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It's a wonderful story.That's what erotica is not bang...bang

I urge you to write more.Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It sure which approach is better

Your doing two different story lines or approaches and I’m not sure which one is better.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 6 years ago
Really captivating story

I hope there more to come.

Just him and her, please no others.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
please

please write more!!

silkcitasilkcitaover 6 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thanks for the feedback. Working on some sci-fi stuff so may be a few weeks for sequel. One comment requested no additional characters. Whaaat? And leave those strippers unmolested? No sir.

Also, i 'borrowed' the premise from

GEORGETASKER: A Very Personal Assistant

I liked it. If anyone has similar stories, let me know.

silkcita

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Holy FUCK

Such a hot beginning! 5 Stars. Can't wait for more!

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
THERE IS NO "ACCOUNTING" FOR TASTE

bad as it is, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Delightfully Naughty

You have enough material for a dozen chapters, don't let us stop you. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
where are the sequels?

... seems as if You prefer restarting the story to continuing ... Just wondering.

Thanks; S.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More this secretary needs to be taken

And her best friends mom too,

!

Please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

More!! More!! Great story

AlexstrazaAlexstrazaover 5 years ago
Please more

Please more. Her friend too. Make her friend reluctant. Tammy helps boss fuck her feiwnd

BigjimstBigjimstover 5 years ago
Nice Job!

Very well written, love the build up.

iknowwhatiknowwhatover 5 years ago
Need a follow up

Really enjoyed the story, sequel please :)

TickleyourpickleTickleyourpicklealmost 4 years ago
Loved the first half

I liked it, though more the first part if I'm honest. I was intrigued when he suddenly turned cold on Tammy Lyn because of what he had seen but I need a follow up to see what's going to happen next.

I reckon you didn't need the stripper/underworld dealings if this was a standalone as it stands up well compared to GeorgeTaskers Personal Assistant stories

Hope to see a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue

If you read this please continue the story!!

GwillisGwillisover 3 years ago

This story is so good and definitely needs a continuation if you ever return. Chris is an unorthodox type of protagonist; he’s cold hearted and shady, but he does have a generous side that makes him more likable than a totally evil predator would be. Tammy initially comes across as an airhead but she does have some warmth and depth to her that shows she has great potential to grow as a person over the course of the story.

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