by silkcita
If you have more of this story I can't wait to read it!
I urge you to write more.Thank you.
Your doing two different story lines or approaches and I’m not sure which one is better.
I hope there more to come.
Just him and her, please no others.
Thanks for the feedback. Working on some sci-fi stuff so may be a few weeks for sequel. One comment requested no additional characters. Whaaat? And leave those strippers unmolested? No sir.
Also, i 'borrowed' the premise from
GEORGETASKER: A Very Personal Assistant
I liked it. If anyone has similar stories, let me know.
silkcita
You have enough material for a dozen chapters, don't let us stop you. :-)
... seems as if You prefer restarting the story to continuing ... Just wondering.
Thanks; S.
And her best friends mom too,
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Please continue the story
Please more. Her friend too. Make her friend reluctant. Tammy helps boss fuck her feiwnd
I liked it, though more the first part if I'm honest. I was intrigued when he suddenly turned cold on Tammy Lyn because of what he had seen but I need a follow up to see what's going to happen next.
I reckon you didn't need the stripper/underworld dealings if this was a standalone as it stands up well compared to GeorgeTaskers Personal Assistant stories
Hope to see a sequel
This story is so good and definitely needs a continuation if you ever return. Chris is an unorthodox type of protagonist; he’s cold hearted and shady, but he does have a generous side that makes him more likable than a totally evil predator would be. Tammy initially comes across as an airhead but she does have some warmth and depth to her that shows she has great potential to grow as a person over the course of the story.