All Comments on 'The Ache Inside Us All'

Halloween is too just too far away.My poor heart couldnt take it;almost just quit on me again readin this sexy story about all that gut wrenching heart-ache.Same family problems,same group too.I was just thinkin of melinda and how 'much her constant loveing and mutual contact meant to me';makeing me think its not so depressing after all.What is love?HUH?It still hurts me and I swore an oath on my heart that,basically,if my 'current(at the time) most loved and loyal lover-wive turnd on me and the legal world I stand for,I dont get it back till 'the silence vows are broken' and the salesmen and the jedi-mindfuck-mentallity are laughd at and made fun of in old past-time jokes (aka...Like;"Hey,the Emperour isnt wearing any clothing and walking around in plain sight...Ha ha ha;those two guards and the guys they hired are sure going to pay for this gross negligence.").I found a girl,one of my daughters;she gave believed enough in me to give it back to me.Till the day she decided to put a leash of money on me;to keep me close even though she knew I was still needed for healing the pains and depressions of misguided and or lost souls from coast to coast,related to me or not;on that day I had to start to hunt again.Now its not so bad 'order' wize;just alot of bullshit to be naild down and or hardwired,that is for sure.

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