All Comments on 'The Adventures of Andrew Ch. 03'

You really REALLY need to write more, here...and if possible expand on what you have. Because this, as the Germans like to say, izt ka-VOLLE-tee!

...but please, decided whether Andrew's girlfriend's name is Kate or Kathy. It's kind of distracting. Even if you opt not to take my advice, though, PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS STORY! :)