All Comments on 'The Adventures of Dick and Jane Ch. 01'

a Drugged out master.

Good story line, great visualization, but I don't know any one that is in the lifestyle that uses drugs. A sub just doesn't need nor should a Dom/me ever use drugs during a sceen, after a sceen anytime at all.

I think I would like to make it clear that this is a fantasy story. It is not based on real life, the characters are not based on any real people, and Dick is named Dick for a reason. He gets worse as the story continues. This is not about a "good" Master, it is no reflection on the BDSM lifestyle, and is entirely a work of fiction. Please keep that in mind.

Wish you'd write some more.