by tyler_jennifer
Yo anon. Do not criticise others efforts just because you are too retarded. The story is good so far. Written in simple English. What's there so hard to follow?
Another good episode. Please keep them coming. There are small errors in the English but not enough to spoil the flow. Contact me or another editor if you want to tidy it up. Thanks for writing.
I like the build-up to Jennifer's adventure, where one thing leads to another. My favorite part was when the husband suggested that Tyler make a game for Jasmine. I wondered what Jasmine would think of that deal... Keep the chapters coming