All Comments on 'The Adventures of Jennifer Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
dumb

to hard to follow not worth the effort

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Re:dumb

Yo anon. Do not criticise others efforts just because you are too retarded. The story is good so far. Written in simple English. What's there so hard to follow?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Damn, I will give the blow job, continue the story. . love it

HeaditorHeaditorabout 8 years ago
Simple and fun

Another good episode. Please keep them coming. There are small errors in the English but not enough to spoil the flow. Contact me or another editor if you want to tidy it up. Thanks for writing.

jessica_tang_vonharperjessica_tang_vonharperabout 8 years ago
Exciting adventure

I like the build-up to Jennifer's adventure, where one thing leads to another. My favorite part was when the husband suggested that Tyler make a game for Jasmine. I wondered what Jasmine would think of that deal... Keep the chapters coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Short...

But sweet. Nice job so far!

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