All Comments on 'The Adventures of Mike & Sis Ch. 01'

Looking forward to more chapters!

Good job! Looking forward to more chapters. Hope Mike's sis gets to show him what sexy outfits/heels she bought at the mall. Lots of potential - keep it up.

I will be looking for more of this very Hot story. You are very talented for your young age. Keep up the very good work, BUT PLEASE make it fast before I forget the first part of the story.

if you are looking for a good complete story then stop and look else where this writer can't seem to finish what she starts even after over a year so don't waste your time here look else where

either finish this story or remove it unfinished stories are totally unfair to the readers and a waste of our time. so choose finish or remove one or the other and do it NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DBRS

By A Wanker

I feeeeeeeeel..... like I have fleeeeeeeeas... all over meeeee......

I feeeeeeeeel..... like I have fleeeeeeeeas... all over meeeee......

And wheeeeeen... I gooooooo..... to the grooooo-ce-reee....

I have to get down on my kneeeeeeeees.....

I feeeeeeeeel.....

like I have fleeeeeeeeas...

all oveh-her meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!

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i like the direction this story is taking On to chapter 2..........

This sucks! You just left all your stories unfinished. Thanks!