All Comments on 'The Adventures of Modesty Girl Pt. 03'

Good descriptive writing. Great horny images. Keep it going, please!

Very original story and writing, please keep it going!

Not sure what to say, this is exactly what I was looking for, and I didn't even know it. Would love to see more.

Continue please. Good writing

Mr AP, your opening note sounded a little concerning about your motivation to continue Penny's story. Please don't concern yourself with the lack of comments. Readers in the Exhibition & Voyeur category aren't the most active on the commentary boards. (You need to write a Loving Wives story to get the commentariat riled up and involved.)

I think you've created a fascinating situation and it can go a lot further than one more chapter if you are motivated to keep it going. But it's your story and the decision is yours.

Whatever you decide to do, I have found it to be a delightful little piece of fantasy thus far, and well written.

Lue

I like the trust you've offered on the typical superheroine stories. Instead of getting caught and stripped, she must instead perform everything naked or must put herself in peril. I like where you're going with this and can't wait for the next edition.

One of the hottest stories I have ever read. Please do keep writing. The future possibilities and scenarios are limitless for such a kind of story. For example, as Modesty Girl keeps developing adaptation to being nude in public, she might resort to very unconventional methods of humiliating herself in order to save the day like kissing the nearest girl at a crime scene, squatting on a table and spreading her legs for people to see her everything, rubbing herself against a pole on a street, humping a metal table edge at a restaurant etc...

Good job