All Comments on 'The Adventures of Penny Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
no thanks

Nobody has to work for anything, she just does whatever anybody wants to do to her,stupid story.

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2almost 9 years ago
Good story, love that she is fucking all the time

Eat it annony you asshole

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
ENTERTAINING STORY - 4.55*

It should not be taken seriously. It is funny. It is fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Bonnie likes it! It's garbage!

Not a single clever or interesting part here. Really bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sweet summer escapism

Ignore that first anonymous, please. This was a nice story and perfect for ending summer. I loved the way it comes from a woman's perspective that is actually believable, and how everything worked together to set up a mood and pace of a lazy vacation day.

Not all spanking stories need to be filled with anger or overt dominance (variety is nice), and this one a nice example of a sexy story that takes a break from all that. If there's such a thing as a spanking beach read, this is it. . . Keep up the good work.

(and thanks for editing your stuff first, and for avoiding my other pet peeve. . .describing your female characters according to their measurements)

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