by mousemoonwalk
Nobody has to work for anything, she just does whatever anybody wants to do to her,stupid story.
Eat it annony you asshole
It should not be taken seriously. It is funny. It is fantasy.
Not a single clever or interesting part here. Really bad.
Ignore that first anonymous, please. This was a nice story and perfect for ending summer. I loved the way it comes from a woman's perspective that is actually believable, and how everything worked together to set up a mood and pace of a lazy vacation day.
Not all spanking stories need to be filled with anger or overt dominance (variety is nice), and this one a nice example of a sexy story that takes a break from all that. If there's such a thing as a spanking beach read, this is it. . . Keep up the good work.
(and thanks for editing your stuff first, and for avoiding my other pet peeve. . .describing your female characters according to their measurements)