All Comments on 'The Adventures with Zac Efron Ch. 01'

This is the cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers IMO. I do like, and by that I mean fantasize about, Zac so imagining him in your story is easy and enjoyable.

Nice writing too. While I am no better at it the grammar seemed fine. I think you are on the right track having Zac confused over and/or question his actions. Looking forward to the next installment.

Liked the story, but maybe the next chapter could be a little longer?!

Well done. Is there more?