All Comments on 'The Affair'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great start...

I enjoyed your story about how this affair started and progressed to the point of her satisfaction and climax. Who is calling him?! Waiting anxiously for the next part of this affair story.

coolpencoolpenalmost 12 years ago
Wonderful but ...?

A lovely story that built well and so easy for me to identify with but then what?

Did you run out of ideas?

Such a pity not to bring the story to a climax.

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