All Comments on 'The Affair Ch. 01'

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sparktjsparktjover 7 years ago

Superb writing, very realistic and therefore highly arousing. Looking forward to this developing further.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hoping for more

Well written. An enjoyable read. I do hope there's more.

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 7 years ago
5 stars

Horny hump hump fun with a seductive older business babe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interersting

Once Fiona uses David for both business and pleasure he will be dumped.

DarktaviousDarktaviousover 7 years ago
Awesome!!!

This had me at the very start.....I can't wait to read the next chapter

kuysmigzkuysmigzover 7 years ago
sexually arousing

Very well written. I could imagine I was on David's shoes.

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