All Comments on 'The Affair That Went Right'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Your A Sick Fuck

No wonder your wife turned gay on you. Fuck off and get a dog.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Your Brain

must be smaller than the head of your dick. It is apparent by your writing that the only women, including your family members, with whom you have ANY experience take off their clothes, roll over on their backs and put their legs in the air whenever they see a warm bodied human male! Please, save us from any more of this stupidity.

driphoneydriphoneyover 14 years ago
Ahh, buddy ...

delete the below comments. They offer nothing of value and don't deserve the cyber-time. Find an editor, or a new editor, and resubmit with some changes. Your dialogue is good, and the story is a standard stoker for the site. You just need the punctuation straightened out.

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