All Comments on 'The Age Machine Ch. 01'

Very well written, spelling and grammar ... and wording is excellent.

You have my stamp of approval ... and anxiously awaiting more. :)

Diana

Exceedingly well written . . . so much so that I don't want to read the next installment on an erotic forum. This is a great premise, and I think you will be able to deliver.

But it's not what I'm looking for here. Best of luck with your continued efforts.

I was "commissioned" to write this story based on this premise: A man trading ages with his wife, as an act of submission.

Perhaps that factoid might affect how you judge the work.