All Comments on 'The Age of Enlightenment'

by jlorthia

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ConsideringConsideringover 8 years ago
Beautiful

A fantastic piece of erotica! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really enjoyed this

I hope there will be another chapter...2 pages and you've created a far more interesting story than most of the authors on here make in 5

maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
Wait for it.

I don't think Robert Lee, and Victoria are done.

jlorthiajlorthiaover 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the positive response.

I initially wrote this story to end with a kind of "cliff hanger" and uncertainty and had no intention of writing a sequel, but the positive response is making me rethink this and it is very possible that I may write a sequel. Thank you!

AcaciaBlossomAcaciaBlossomover 8 years ago
Great job!

You hit a lot of the things I like - I really enjoyed it!

There were a few things to do with the costuming that pushed me out of the story, which I realize probably isn't an issue for most readers. If you'd like to talk some more about that, hit me up through my profile! I'd be happy to give some tips.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I agree with all the comments. I thoroughly enjoyed this, really well written....I want more! Please and thank you

LateNightStoriesLateNightStoriesover 8 years ago
Great

This is bloody genius. I really appreciate stories that emphasise the psychological over the physical.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Does it really end now?

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