I'm glad I looked past the ratings that were left by readers who obviously have the attention span shorter than a gnat's ass - there is great potential here as the build-up is clearly just starting.
Hey all, used to write stories a lot when I was younger, but stopped at around 12/13 when I discovered animation and music. These days I've gotten back into it, but as a way to let off sexual steam. It's kinda fun :)