All Comments on 'The Agency Ch. 05 (Training Camp)'

using Spellcheck before submitting. It won't catch everything but it certainly would have found 'hygine' and 'excentuate' and corrected them to hygiene and accentuate. An editor would help immensely, as would adding conflict of some type so there is an actual plot rather than merely listing events as they happen.

You thought of an intriguing scenario. Now what?

I appreciate the feedback. I have been typing most of these stories on my phone and spellcheck hasn't caught any of those. This story will eventually run into conflict but I do not plan on incorporating conflict into each chapter. This is a longer story that is apart of a series. I have hinted at some eventual conflict, so you will have to read more as the story progresses. A lot of these earlier chapters are setting the scene for the future.

As far as an editor is concerned, I am not going for a profession piece, merely one that I write for fun. If you are looking for a professionally written story with perfect grammar and structure you may want to look elsewhere.

Thanks for the thoughts!

This is one of the best stories I've ever read with a great premise and enough plot to keep it interesting. For the future though, I think, especially with the amount of different places and people, you have so much opportunity for variety in the sexual scenes. The one other thing would be to possibly write some scenes about where whoever he's with didn't want sex and explore the non-sexual side of his job as well

looking forward to the next one.

I'm glad that you are enjoying the series! I definitely have a few interesting twists that I would like to incorporate into the story. Please stay tuned as the story develops and some of these plot lines evolve and develop.

I like the story so far. I would like to see a story in which he has to pleasure a c Lister or a very unexpected client not on the list of his compatible types. Oh maybe someone totally off the wall like Missy Elliot or a foreign dignitary like the current president of Argentina or any from this list http://www.rantlifestyle.com/2014/03/17/20-hottest-female-politicians/