All Comments on 'The Agency h. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Good work!

Cannot wait to read more.

Perhaps the agency can subcribe a chastity belt to their targets in order to get better "donations"...

Please, keep on writing!

Amity

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Please write more. This has the potential to be a multi chapter story.

kuellarkuellaralmost 13 years ago
Fantastic

Great work, this was really well written. Drew me in from the beginning, very well described and nicely paced. Really looking forward to seeing more of your stories!

Have fun and keep writing :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Dont know why, but...

For some reason I really loved the last line. It just ends the story so perfectly.

hoursneakhoursneakover 11 years ago
Fascinating

Great story with intrigue to boot. Too bad we never got chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The writing is good, only couple of mistakes. The storyline is a little weak though with too many “stages” to obtaining the sperm.

See what happens in the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

All a bit silly with the gag, then scarf, then hand.

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