All Comments on 'The All New Chris'

I really liked your story...near the end you had four or five typos but overall it was very well written.

Noticed a typo but other than that you have a gift.

George

You really should have been more careful in your writing. Not only are there several typos as a couple of readers noted, you also mixed up Chris and Sally's names and at the end Holly and Sally's. This sort of thing is extremely annoying. And the mixing up of loose and lose always drives me batty!

As far as the story concept itself, yeah, I liked it. But since we're dealing with witchcraft here, it would have been interesting if Chris had had to turn back into a boy after some space of time, and Sally had had to deal with the fact of this person she now loved being of the wrong sex. Give the story a bit of a twist, eh?

Don't mind the others' comments about typos - the main thing is that you have written an incredible story. Really incredible. One of the best ever. Thank you.

There are some grammar mistakes but overall, I'm amazed. You have no idea how this story hit me, I just wish something like that was possible without the thousands of dollars and years of adjusting and months of pain.

Not bad..but we need much cruelty from bitch

I love it so much. It made me very happy and thankful for this story. Very glad that I read it. Kudos...

Thanks for the good love story, I enjoyed it.