by Midday_Crisis
... it was pretty damned good.
Love the interplay between Tony and "Gator"girl. And her commanding presence with him, especially considering the size difference between them.
She was a very likeable character, imo, and actually reminiscent of a girl I knew, many years ago.
Brought back some very fond memories.
Thanks.
She sounds perfect and it sounds like dad is going to have to give daughter some dick also.
I always enjoy your stories and it's unfair to expect perfection in editing so I rarely if ever comment on errors, but this 9ne just cracked me up, apologies....
The last thing she wanted was to be interrupted mid colitis by an irate best friend.
I feel the same way :)