All Comments on 'The Alteration'

wud have loved to read her getting fucked the next time. moreover, even the second suck was too brief. wud have been nice if it was a bit longer. anyways nice build up of story

Thanks Jason for a great first article. There is a small laundry store in my office complex...makes me want to go and see if a "Lily" works here also!

With distinct! Loved it, thank you :)

A well written and enjoyable story. The most laughable thing about the story is the type of wife she will make.