All Comments on 'The Amazonian Twins'

it is wonderful that you found some mighty impressive words to use. However, with all the grammatical errors, missed words (there were several instances where you just missed putting a word there...) and goofiness, I thought it sucked, and not in a good way.

I'll give a shot to the next installment...maybe there will be improvement.

Really engrossing.Will check out the next chapter.

I guess probably not, given how old this story is, but I am curious as to what the outcome would be.