All Comments on 'The Amazons Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great start

Intruiging plot that has grabbed my attention...I like your style.

Looking forward to part 2!

ShikeShikeover 9 years ago
Very very interesting.

This is a very good start. It really grabbed my attention. My only request would be longer chapters. :) Otherwise please, please, please continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Intruiging

Well done although a bit on the short side it was well written and so, so hot. Please continue soon. Five stars

gr3ywindgr3ywindover 9 years ago
Got me curious

It could've done with a meaty backstory because we don't know much about the main character to get properly invested. But I'm curious where this is heading...

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago
I'm in

Now I want to know who "ME" is! And if I had to gander based on your user name "ME" was once a man and is now transgender. Inquiring minds want to know - so waiting for chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

That's it...you have to give us more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Yes!

I'm very intrigued ! More please and soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Where's the rest omg this was so good I loved plz finish!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Hot and wet

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
!!!!!

DUDE!! You can't drop an AMAZING chapter like this and not continue!!

Ugh. I always find the good stories 5years too late 😧

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