by transmendoitbetter
Intruiging plot that has grabbed my attention...I like your style.
Looking forward to part 2!
This is a very good start. It really grabbed my attention. My only request would be longer chapters. :) Otherwise please, please, please continue this story.
Well done although a bit on the short side it was well written and so, so hot. Please continue soon. Five stars
It could've done with a meaty backstory because we don't know much about the main character to get properly invested. But I'm curious where this is heading...
Now I want to know who "ME" is! And if I had to gander based on your user name "ME" was once a man and is now transgender. Inquiring minds want to know - so waiting for chapter 2.
DUDE!! You can't drop an AMAZING chapter like this and not continue!!
Ugh. I always find the good stories 5years too late 😧