All Comments on 'The Amnesia of Beth's Father Ch. 02'

very hot, but around the middle you interchanged Cindy and Beth which was a bit confusing.

Good, but keep the names straight.

Really hope you continue this series. Looking forward to the next installment.

ilike it

I'll be editing both parts to this series and resubmitting with in the next week, as well as writing a 3rd installment due to popular demand! If you have suggestions as to where you would like this story to go please pm me!

Sethp!

but ch 1 was better. Looking forward to seeing what you do with the resubmittal. ~CG

I hope the next chapter is the father and daughter make a deal never to tell mother.and continue thier sexual relationship.As father and daughter

the person should be a mother of 2 kids,a 21 boy and 23 year old daughter.The duaghter takes care of her mother 's condition and the son comes home.The brother pretends to be his sister husband or boyfriends and the mother gets them to share the same bed.Then the sister helps her broher get his mother.and the mother regains her memory but pretends shes still confused to finall fuck her son .

Not bad, a few mistakes like with the names, but overall a decent story. The only thing it really lacks is more description and the sex scenes tended to be a little short.

Did this get edited? Beth told him her name was Rita, but that didn't stick.

names of daughter has been switched with friends name confusing

The writer switched beth and Cindy around the end.

You kept confusing the daughter and her friend's names.

Calling them by the other's name.

A fantastic story phuqed up by the last sentence in this chapter, sigh.... I don’t even want to read anymore now because the damned story is ruined with a needless lesbian twist! Also, with friends like Cindy, who the phuq needs enemies?!?