All Comments on 'The Anatomy of an Affair Ch. 02'

this tale of yours. The emotions you describe so accurately certainly come over as a touch autobiographical or perhaps as the recollections of others. But the slightly breathless excitement almost panic feeling of an office affair is wonderfully captured. Leading up to that erotically charged release when opportunities for extended time together happen. Looking forward to the continuation and eventual denouement for these two. It would be good if they could ride off into the rainbow on a unicorn but harsh reality will, no doubt, result in a kick to the proverbials. One little criticism if I may, some of the tale could do with more careful proof reading and correction. And the sudden switch to Sam was a little disconcerting. But still looking forward to more of the delightful Jenny.

I like this tale with fluent dialogues and strong character development. Hot erotic scenes. Well done

To give an 'analytical' title to a plausible affair is really clever. Good storytelling talent there. Well done JennyUK97