All Comments on 'The Anatomy of an Affair'

An excellent first instalment. I love the way that you have built the tension.

It would make me very happy if you would continue this tale.

All the best

Tom D

A good story told well so please continue. Thanks

Yes please continue one of the most realistic stories that I have read

Hey Jenny, this was a very very good read. Love the character build up, the story line, the slow sexiness of it all ....

I look forward to more writing from you and most definitely to the next installment!

..because this is a great first post, but you HAVE to tell us EVERYTHING.

Well written story. Your dialogue and pacing make it extremely believable. Please continue!

You tease. Did you really expect us to say no. Please continue. I like cliffhangers but not when I have an erection!

Thanks - it was good.

please continue ;)

Great start, so you can't leave them there....!

Jenny with a build up like that, I believe you have to finish the rest of the anatomical facts of the affair. Great plot, lots of inferences, great detail, super dialogue, and in keeping with reality. A very believable story

Hope there will be next instalment soon...

You have given a realistic insight to the mental traumas that go with the realisation that such behaviour has repercussions. Lust has no conscience, and it is only after the lust has been satisfied that one can be rational. I hope you continue your saga.

You can't leave it hanging there. You have my full attention, Make it happen Jenny Make it happen

Another chapter, please.

Great Story. Can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you gave us what they were doing now but then we back into the lead in of how it all started.

A very fine build up, I cannot await more!

Hope to see you in chat again.

Perfect, absolutely perfect!! I'm not sure if this is what you do for a living, but it ought to be! Character development, dialogue, build up, can't wait to read more! And after all, isn't that the hallmark of a successful author?

Looking forward to reading more of this imaginative, well-written story.

Great story and well written. Love it Jenny