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by Morgana the Fey

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A critic cannot court

As the voice of angels surrounds this spire

I stare into that sea which defends you from my gaze

in truth I am but one of a litany of suitors

all embraced just once, then sent to oblivion

For in your eyes I see the bonds that tie you to your king

GCM

RobbyR1RobbyR1over 20 years ago
Very Well Done!

Well thought out and Very well written. Excelent use of the vernacular. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Superb! I loved this story!

Morgana you have a great talent for writing! Very sensual story and beautiful story!

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