All Comments on 'The Anniversary Vacation - Kenzie'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

Nope

Sorry this is a nope for me its better tru her brothers eyes also because i am not female so i cant bond with her like i can with her brother i simply dont like a female perspective i hope chapter 6 will be out soon( tru her brothers eyes) series was great so far but if you go this way it will be ruined

Anonymousover 6 years ago

keep practicing. This one isn't quite 'it'.

prop69 over 6 years ago

FANTASTIC AWESOME

Interesting story.

Wishing I had Kenzie as a sister.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

I liked to experience it through her eyes a second time.

It's the same thing but with added depth. Nothing changed but it's now a bit fuller.

Anonymousabout 6 years ago

Liked it

Her perspective adds another layer to the story and brings her emotions into play. Would like to see another story from Kenzi's point of view, preferably after chapter 10.

Waiting for chapter 12....

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