All Comments on 'The Anonymous Gift'

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pjwolfpjwolfover 15 years ago
Bravo

Nicely written and great attention to details. I look forward to reading more submissions from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story!

I love the buildup. The glory hole was an unexpected turn. Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
No

A straight guy DOES care if it's a guy or a girl sucking him off. That ruined the whole story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I love how erotically titillating this is. woohooo

I loe the phrasing and the way this flowed and unfolded. It made me build up slowly and effectively to a superb climax. love this. love it.

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