by bornin54
Nicely written and great attention to details. I look forward to reading more submissions from you.
I love the buildup. The glory hole was an unexpected turn. Can't wait to read more!
A straight guy DOES care if it's a guy or a girl sucking him off. That ruined the whole story.
I loe the phrasing and the way this flowed and unfolded. It made me build up slowly and effectively to a superb climax. love this. love it.