All Comments on 'The Apartment'

I don't see the point of her buying the Hitachi if she isn't gonna use it or at least tell Heather that she don't have to go upstairs to get one.

It just feels unfinished to me, especially because it doesn't look like you are gonna continue the story.

Overall I liked the story a lot. Keep up the good work.

when you said this was slow build-up, you were not kidding I almost stop reading it, so glad I kept going very good story, love the ending

So good. Loved the build up, just makes the sex so much better. I know it said end but I'm hoping there's maybe at least one more chapter. If not fantastic story.

Well written. Well thought out and a logical progression to the finish. I think this is a good start. You're on your way. Now keep it up.

I totally loved it! It was so sexy.

A wonderfully well written and structured piece of writing - so erotic! The masturbating on their bed was very hot and the sex at the end sensual and real! Will look for your next story.

This was a lovely story. Great writing style. Will there be a second part to his story?

On the first reading I actually stopped at the second paragraph. I do not usually enjoy stories that start out with bra sizes. It is the dance that I come for, the physical descriptions don't add nearly as much as the emotional ones. I rather enjoy the journey and find the reward at the end all the better for it. Never the less, I read the story to completion and found it to be quite lovely even if Heather was a little sneaky herself. This may not be a long term relationship for either woman, but they should enjoy life while it lasts. :)

Great story. Similar to another reviewer, the mention of bra sizes makes me suspicious about a story, but further reading put paid to those concerns.

Loved the story! Very well written.

Nicely written, great slow build.

(but fulsome is not what you think)

I fell in love with both of your characters. Thanks!

Loved the build up. Made the ending sweeter. I would be interested in a follow up story. Thanks for the read

...it was still a sublime build up to their climactic union. Nicely constructed and has inspired me to get back to writing.

NOW THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST OPENING CHAPTERS EVER. I'M VERY ANXIOUS TO BEGIN CHAPTER TWO. BUT FELT THE NEED TOO OFFER MY OPINION.

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses and 5🌟's.

I had the feeling, but loved the way you brought the ending out. I little seduction or blackmail would have been erotic also.