All Comments on 'The Apartment Ch. 01'

by krmcm

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girllostgirllostover 15 years ago
So Hot!!

hmmm, I can not tell you how wet your story made me, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The writing is quite poor. Not being sarcastic, is English your first language?

Poor sentence structure. Overly clunky.

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